Saturday, 26 March 2016

Hooks

We have been learning how to write interesting introductions in our recounts to 'hook' our readers.

Thump! Thump! We crept quietly and slowly towards the white door. We could hear the Primary girls class finishing their exam.
By Emaraina

I was patient and excited, waiting for the tournament to begin. It was finally Thursday, the day when the Middle Syndicate cricket teams were going to play.
By Nati

Splish, splash, kick, kick! It was last Wednesday in the middle block and the whole Middle Syndicate were at the Sunnybrae pool getting ready.
By Kaia

I couldn't believe I had done it! I had finally finished...
By Emily

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